You have taken out my heart and ripped it to shreads,
Just imagine it in your hand, no more puppin, its simply dead.
You have left cuts all over it, its bleeding down the side,
do you really care if is living of if it has died.
It was suppose to be a light red sort of color,
but you have turned it more purple, with your hands its been smothered.
The shape appears to be alive and full,
but my heart has turned dark and the shape is more like a piece of coal.
it would normally pump with in a musical way,
but my heart seems to have no music to play.
I just want to you see the physical side of what you do,
but it has nothing left, nothing to give and nothing for you.
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My Heart
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Posted 2 years ago #
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REALLY FEELIN DAT ISH MA...1 THANG I REALIZED BOUT LUV, IZ DAT ITZ ALWAYZ A GAME OF THINKIN N WONDERIN WUT DA OTHER PERSON IZ THINKIN, SUM LEAVE DA PERSON DEY LUV CUZ DEY WERE ABUSED, BUT DEY DONT THINK DEEP ENUFF 2 REALIZE Y DAT PERSON ABUSED DEM, ITZ NOT CUZ DEY DONT LUV DEM, ITZ DAT DEY DONT WANNA LOSE DEM N DEY DONT THINK DA OTHER PERSON LUVZ DEM, DEY DONT WANNA GET DER HEARTBROKEN....MY POINT IZ, ITZ NEVER 1 PERSON'Z FAULT WHEN U BOTH IN LUV, CUZ ITZ BOTH OF U 2GETHER...NUFFIN HAPPENZ 4 NO REASON, PPL AINT HUMBLE ENUFF 2 REALIZE WHEN DEY WRONG IN A RELATIONSHIP, SO DEY TAKE DA EZ WAY OUT N WALK AWAY N LEAVE DA OTHER PERSON, N DEN WONDER Y LUV NEVER WORKZ...BUT DA TRUTH IZ, DA ONLY TRU LUV IZ GOD, N DA CHANCEZ OF 2 REAL PPL FALLIN IN LUV IZ 1 IN A MILLION...
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TRUE...BUT PEOPLE BEEN FALLING IN LOVE FOR THOUSANDS OF YEARS..SINCE THE WORLD WAS CREATED HOMIE..LOVE AIN'T DEAD..IT JUST NOT HERE YET..LOL :P ;)
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HOW MANY PPL U KNO DAT STAY WIT EACH OTHER 4 LIFE? ALL LUV IZ, IZ A WASTE OF TIME...AS MA **** P BLACK (R.I.P.) SAYZ "U LOSE $$ CHASIN BITCHEZ, BUT NEVER BITCHEZ CHASIN $$$..." REAL TALK!!!
I AINT LOOKIN 4 TEMPORARY FAKE LUV, IM LOOKIN 4 REAL LUV DAT LAST 4EVA, N IT SEEM LIKE DAT CANT B FOUND IN NO OTHER PERSON BESIDEZ GOD...REAL TALK!!...I KNO MY LUV REAL, BUT I DUNNO IF I CAN FIND A WOMAN HALF AS REAL AS ME...I GOT MY EYEZ OPEN, BUT I AINT SEARCHIN 2 HARD, CUZ DER AINT DAT MANY REAL WOMEN LEFT NE MORE...I KNO DERZ SUM, BUT DEY DA MINORITY....
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LCM that's a sad outlook, you don't chase anything. Real love can be found and "chasin bitchez" ain't the way you gonna find it. Chasin $ isn't gonna bring happiness either cos you are never satisifed. I know an older guy once told me he wanted to earn $100 a week and then he'd be able to get everything he needed. Sounds funny now.
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itz a sad outlook, but itz da truth, yungnz diein from hiv n hunger iz a sad outlook 2...but itz reality...i aint chasin nuffin n no1 except god, u need $$ 2 survive n live, if u been in da same situationz as me, u wud realize how important $$ iz 2 live...without it u dont eat n u homeless, i aint talkin bout chainz n watchez homie, im talkin bout livin day by day...when u aint got $$$, c how many ppl gone help u n kum around, den when u got $$$, every1 wanna kum around n use u...da ony tru friend iz god...datz y i ride 2 deep 4 life, other **** who weak need luv, friendz, n family, not me tho...my only nesecity iz god...real talk!!!..u need 2 have more strive if u wanna get $$ n live good...broke **** never eat...
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:')
.. a teary happy facePosted 2 years ago # -
Words of wisdom
come to my ears,
Telling me what I know in my heart,
But never wanted to hear.With the truth finally said
and out in the open for me to plainly see,
I wonder why I can love so deeply
but never had that love returned back to me.I confessed the feelings
that I held inside for so long,
But with his soft- hearted rejection,
I realize I have to be strong.With tears that want to flow
from my eyes,
I feel that my heart,
along with my composure, slowly dies.While this dramatic side is showing through
with my ability to question and reason,
I think I may have found
something in me that I can believe in.Love hurts . . .
That's what they all say,
But I will love again
when all this pain and sorrow goes away.So I sit and think of all the things
this situation has cost,
And I realize that nothing
very important has been lost.Instead, a learning experience
has come from all this.
I've learned that hardly anything
is more important than my happiness.Posted 2 years ago # -
dang lala.
that was very heart felt. i personally love quite a few parts of ur poem..
"I wonder why I can love so deeply
but never had that love returned back to me"
that line right there, really got to me, i've felt like that...ad honestly most of the time still do."So I sit and think of all the things
this situation has cost,
And I realize that nothing
very important has been lost."
seriously lala.. ahah i wanna shoot you cuz it made me wanna cry lol.. i wondered all the time why "losers were attracted to me, why i allowed people to walk all over me, why do/did i allow such rude people to hurt me.. but i realized it was what i was used to.. i was used to people telling me what to do, i was used to the drama that went with some friends.. but now Lala.. i've moved on..i've grown" up..not very much bcuz im still young. but u get the point :)Posted 2 years ago # -
This is a very beautiful poem. It describes a lot of relationships perfectly. One I was in for 10 years! I've been single now for 7 years, and have finally decided that the Lord God is my only source of REAL love.
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